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chapter 5 - page 01

June 21st, 2010, 10:51 am

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dedasaur, June 21st, 2010, 6:40 pm

it's Cinderella's shot right there in the last panel XDD I love that shot, when she reflects in all the bubbles... Enchanted used that too.

The narrator here is Kane, he is a bit more ironic than I am... I have to say LOL.

Some things you'll figure out by the end of chapter though. Just follow the flow... I kinda change things as I go according to narrative necessities... so, some of the storyboards might change if I get new ideas. There are a couple of new things in here already!

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dedasaur, June 22nd, 2010, 9:16 am

you know what? I'll follow your suggestion, instead!
Let's leave Kane out of this... for now! :D

I've had an idea... it will make it better for Castalia in the future.

dedasaur, June 22nd, 2010, 9:29 am

Eh, no, the blog entry is due to the fact we'll see Fickle in the next release...

Anyways... I just recently changed a key scene - like yesterday LOL - so... I just remembered I need Castalia to be a little more oblivious on how a man's heart works... and since she reads the log it's better to leave HER out.

Anyway Kane will hint at the fact that he knows... and we know he knows cuz he observes his "buddies". But Man Talk is Man Talk and that needs to stay like that... so I'll leave this observation to my other narrator, the one who's telling the story and that will be revealed in the end.

dedasaur, June 22nd, 2010, 9:42 am

LOL okay, but you have to participate in at least two contest to have a drawing of the narrator! XDD

dedasaur, June 22nd, 2010, 10:11 am

Supervillain... the caption in Italics is Kane writing his log... the one written with regular font is the narrator of the story XDD

She poster her comment here after reading the whole thing. Once you get to page 9 you'll probably understand what she is referring to. :D

Yay, Pea luv! *_*

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elianthos, June 21st, 2010, 2:01 pm

ahh, the captain's log you told me about is finally here. Now I have only a little doubt: in the last page for this update (Wes' realization) is still the captain speaking or is it the omniscent narrator? Although I could envision Kane pulling the omniscent narrator thing ( the pirate Balthazar is perfect and up to every situation ;D ), I 99% think it's the omniscent narrator there.
Maybe you could change the font for Kane's log 'voice' to help differentiating ? Just a thought.

Pea is such a Disney heroine of old in the last panel of this page ^^.
Also, lol, Sandra has made holes in everybody's underwear.

elianthos, June 22nd, 2010, 8:53 am

@Deda: hmmm, considering you're quite the ironic type already, this says a lot about Kane XD, ohohohoh
In an case, that Kane is the one speaking here is quite clear, I was less certain of it on page 9 :). But after reading your blog entry I'm ok *had a Foxy moment ^_^ ; *

elianthos, June 22nd, 2010, 9:20 am

oh. I wonder what I've unleashed now XD.
And if it's related to your chameleon blog entry somehow...

elianthos, June 22nd, 2010, 9:36 am

Ooh, we have a secret narrator then :D.
My main guess: Pifo :> . If by the end I'll be proved right I'd wish for a little drawing of him blowing me a big sloppy kiss XD.

elianthos, June 22nd, 2010, 9:47 am

HA! Just you wait >3 .
And I'm planning to do extra-contests pinups of the other guys too anyway XD. Just waiting for my cherries, I'm at my best fanservice-wise around that time XD.

Supervillain, June 22nd, 2010, 10:08 am

*got confused trying to understand the above comments* unknown narrator?! Kane's log?! WHAT?! @_____@".....

but yes! The last panel of Pea is SUPER!!!! *goes to join the other 3 pirates in swooning* *U*

webcomiclover, December 19th, 2010, 3:11 pm

It's a secret Cinderella shout out!

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