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chapter 8 - page 03

October 31st, 2010, 6:14 am

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dedasaur, October 31st, 2010, 7:54 pm

Ah there's a typo in the English version...
she is supposed to start the first panel with a "PLEASE don't say that we started on the wrong foot again" I will fix this tonight....

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elianthos, October 31st, 2010, 4:10 pm

Her sentence in the first panel is a bit abrupt maybe. I'm missing a pause with the previous page somehow (even just a textless panel), but it's more a personal taste of mine flow-wise here than a problem per se :>.
Everything else I adore here. From the sprinkle of wry-ness of his Jew remark to his saying sorry while confessing-not his feeling of luuuurve, to the much anticipated backstory hints. Again, he says alot without saying much. Relatedly, you do hate to spoon-feed your readers, don't you ;)?
Anyway... you wrote in the blog we would witness him smiling a lot, even at his saddest, even on the verge of tears. Well, I was really looking forward to see the latter kind of smile. And here it comes. Both he and you don't disappoint. I love the last panel. LOVE as in teary capital letters of restrained manpain (and this goes in my sketches wishlist pronto, you mark that XD) . Someone give the guy a hug NOW, even a figurative one will do.
Come on Kes, show what you're made of when your man is weeping inside :)
*I mean, evem myself and the sky outside are crying buckets XDDD T_T*

SecretComicLover (Guest), November 8th, 2010, 7:32 pm

What would he reply to the part about starting?

Mistress0fDragons, March 4th, 2016, 3:51 pm

Wait... what is he taking about?



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